Group Critique Notes

OVERVIEW

Went over how going to change it so that is a parallel between the Great Fire of 1835 and 9/11.

• Could be a fictional fire

 - try not to be so literal

• exaggeration

• modern massive legends

Sports heroes

- Heroes let us down

        -play on how culture has changed

        -contemporary legend - so flawed, captivating and in love with characters we would never want to meet in real life

       - meth addict save the world

       -obsession with finding flaws and negative

Old way:  face trials and get ahead

New way: face trials and fail

• Comparison: old hero and new

-obvious clear shift

- magic, how child views icons

     •books, toys

       - hat and a garden hose

       -pretend to be that character

     •Kids room today, branding

       -toys

* KEEP MOSE

- legend lives

- real crisis, firemen since 9/11 not given hero status

- hero revered

- real life ones forgotten

- reality: nobody cares

• reveal information:

    -recession wages

    -learn about heroism through aftermath

    - real heroism doesn't live

• use statistics

•CLEAR UP CONCEPTS

• shoe parallel worlds/gameplay

• need to see more

• Oil rig incident

- legendary based on corruption

- look for more stuff

• how we consume these stories has changed

- old: theatre, books, word of mouth

- new: twitter, email, movies, television

More on Firefighting

MODERN FIRES

• burn hotter and faster due to synthetic materials 

• completely new way of fighting fires

• old way: used to cut in a hole to ventilate out the smoke and give the people inside a fighting chance

• new way: get water on the fire as soon as possible but do not ventilate because that lowers the oxygen content of the room to unbreathable levels and makes the fires hotter

• todays firefighters need to fight fires faster and update their strategy

FIRES IN OTHER MEDIA

I've found that cartoons are pretty similar to tall tales in that they tell stories in an incredibly unbelievable fashion. Here are some examples from 1930s-1940s.

Firefighting 1800s America

• There was no government run Fire Departments in the US until the time of the civil war ~ 1860

- prior to this independent, private fire brigades compete with each other to be the first to respond to a fire because insurance companies paid the brigades to pay buildings

• Fire Houses were social gathering place rather than a place where professionals would meet and the money paid to the brigade went into the house's fund rather than to individual members

Firefighting used to be a for-profit industry

• private "clubs" or "gangs" were in charge of putting out fires

• first club at the scene got the money front he insurance company

-incentive to get there fast

-incentive to sabotage competition

-got into fights over territory and many times buildings would burn down before the issue was resolved

• they were glorified looters

• New York companies famous for sending runners out to fires with a large barrel to cover the hydrant closes to the fire in advance of the engines

-fights would break out over choice fire hydrants

-firefighting became a spectator sport where people would gather on the streets and cheer on their favorite company

Firefighting in the early 19th century was difficult and dangerous work.

   • firefighters are volunteers

   • equipment is cumbersome and required great physical strength, stamina and speed

   • used pump wagons that were pulled by firefighters

System of bells informed firefighters of where the fire was

- people would light candles in the window so that the firefighters going through the streets could see

Mose the Fireman

• Mose was a New York Firefighter in the 1800s

 • most likely based on Bowery Boy leader Mose Humphrey

- printer, brawler, and firefighter

• "the toughest man in the nation's toughest city"

• Mose Appearance

- Irish : red hair

- eight-twelve feet tall, broad shouldered

- hands the size of virginia hams

- super long arms, could scratch his knee without bending over

- red shirt and a red helmet as big as a tent

-carried uprooted lamppost into battle

Mose is funny, heroic, and sentimental in his role as the guardian daemon of the Bowery

- knightly acts and honest virtue

Stories

• enters a ladies bowling parlor in female disguise, he promptly kisses a fair bowler and blows their cover.

• prospecting for gold in California, he spars with a bear and parlays hopelessly with the Indians

• in London he marvels at the mummies in the British museum but considers "They ain't no good to nuthin,"  dons the gloves of the Lord Brougham, and, presented at court, hopes that the Queen's children are "pretty bright and sassy."

• saves babies from burning building

• saves a family from a fourth story building by putting the ladder on barrels and climbing up

Mose lost popularity with the era of steam fire-engines

- killed off Mose in plays, but he doesn't really stay dead.

-when his girl turned him down fled to the South Seas where he married and island princess and became the king of the Sandwich Islands and raised forty half breed children

But even today when a bum picks up a cigarette stub he says "Big Mose must of dropped it." so the legend is still alive. 

Tall Tales

A Tall Tale is a story with unbelievable elements, related as if they were true and factual.

- fundamental element of American Folk Literature

- origins seen in the bragging contests that often occurred when the rough men of the American frontier gathered

• Myth and Tall Tale line is distinguished by age

- myths exaggerate the exploits of their heroes

- tall tales the exaggeration looms large, to the extent of becoming the whole story

Four things all Tall Tales have in common:

1) The main character has a regular job but is larger-than-life or superhuman in his or her abilities

2) The character has a problem or problems that he or she solves in a funny way

3) Details in the story are exaggerated beyond belief

4) Characters use everyday language and are like common people in behavior

Exaggeration is the major element in Tall Tales

   • Tall Tale heroes are bigger or stronger than real people even when the tale is based on a real person

   • Many tall tales are based on actual people or on a composite of actual people

   • a tall tale is a story the narrator does not believe but which is supposed to fool the naive listener

- told in straight faced manner for the purpose of presenting "true" pictures of 19th century life

   • during this time real and legendary exploits were inseparable 

American Values in Tall Tales

• gargantuan physical courage

• sense of humor for the truly absurd

• frontier expansion

• independence, male bonding

• chivalry

• control of the environment

• dominance by physical strength

• "one-ups-man-ship" 

- a very american trait that is critical to the spreading of tall tales. Each successive storyteller tries to add something more outrageous to the tall tale as he or she is telling it

• Heroes of tall tales were unique American pioneers and, like the land itself, they were gigantic, extravagant, restless, and flamboyant

- they had no use for modesty

- bragged outrageously about their capacity for fighting, drinking, lovemaking, swearing, and hard work

• some real men, others various conglomerations of historical fact, storytelling of ordinary people, and the imagination of professional writers

• They are creations of American Mass Media and we see them continuously recreated and reborn in books and films

The Code

• 3 sacred promises that appear to provide both independent motivation and male bonding for tall tale characters

1) Respect the land

2) Defend the defenseless

3) Never spit in the presence of women and children (the act of spitting is a male bonding experience apparently) 

BFA Proposal

I want to do an interactive story that combines my drawing abilities with my coding abilities, animation abilities and storytelling abilities.

My idea is to take a classic American folk tale hero: Mose the Fireman and recount one of his stories in exciting detail. The story will be entirely interactive so that parts of it will be revealed as the viewer clicks on certain things. Within this story will be other branch stories that can be triggered by clicking other parts of the frames.

I have to pay careful attention to camera angles as I am thinking this will be set up similar to a comic but far more interactive. I am also thinking that I will make it a vertical format because smoke rises.

The final format will be an interactive media piece that will be displayed on a computer so that the audience can interact with it.

Rough Timeline

Week 1-2 – Write script, come up with concept and do rough storyboards.

Week 2-8 – Start finalizing panels and drawings

Week 4-9 – Scan in panels and work on coding

Week 9-10 – Double check all coding and make sure everything is in working order.

Notebook Assignment

At first I wasn't so sure what to think about the notebook project. I've always enjoyed writing down entertaining things that have happened to me in the past, and I love to tell stories about my daily “adventures”. The notebook was hard, though, because I had to constantly remind myself to use it and in the end it was merely more of my same anecdotes and quotes. It didn't open up any shining new frontiers like I had been half convinced it would when we were given the assignment. So, I didn't care much for the assignment, but it wasn't too difficult to do.